Question

Hey! I wrote and copyrighted a new song called "The Beast."

I would love ANY feedback (as long as it isn't rude).

I need to get an understanding of how people will view the song for what it is, and the best way I can do that is to show the lyrics ONLY. (That way no one will be focused on just the sound.) Then I can post how it will sound! :D

Thanks in advance! :)

Answer 1

Somebody told me that I'm a Beauty
And as a Beauty, I need to tread carefully, mm-hmm
Well I believed them, I am a good girl
But they didn't say how hard it could be
How hard it could be

I didn't know that you'd come for me
Should have known trouble'd be coming for me
They didn't warn me, brace me, save me
Oh my my, they forgot the Beast

I can't believe it, I'm not a seeker
For trouble, so it goes and seeks me out, mm-hmm, mm-hmm
Owners of pure hearts rebuke temptation
Especially when it has a handsome face
A handsome face

I didn't know that a Beast could have
Pretty eyes - and nobody told me
They didn't warn me, brace me, save me
Oh my my my, they forgot the Beast

I didn't know that you'd come for me (Beast with pretty eyes)
Should have known trouble'd be coming for me (and nobody told me)
They didn't warn me, brace me, save me
Oh my my, they forgot the Beast

They forgot the Beast (3x)


They forgot the Beast

© Christal Morris

Answer 2

WOW....THIS IS INCREDIBLE (and I can totally relate to this!!!) Good job GURL :)

Answer 3

Can you tell me how copyright your stuff? Because I love writing songs as well and I don't want my lyrics stolen

Answer 4

:D Thank you!

Okay, to copyright is actually pretty easy. First, you need to make sure that you didn't accidentally copy anyone else. But usually, that's not a problem when you write your own stuff. Then, you can use a site like this http://myows.com/ to copyright for free. However, when you write something original, it is yours by domain, so you can legally put a copyright sign to anything you create on your own.

OR you could go to the US Copyright board and register it for a $35 fee...

Answer 5

Thanks so much!!!

Answer 6

:D Of course! :)

Answer 7

This is great keep it up
!!!!!!!!!

Answer 8

Thank you so much @helter-skelter12345 ! :D

Answer 9

I cant post my work cause its "Inappriote xD"

Answer 10

LOL

Answer 11

wow XD well there you go

Answer 12

Its not bad. you use a lot of repetitive lyrics try not to do that so much unless it is in the cores and add more rhymes to it other than that good job.

Answer 13

It's kind of an abstract song. It's a ballad. So the repetitive parts ARE in the cores, and that would be why I don't rhyme so often. If this were a rap, though, I would've been more on point with the rhyme scheme. :) Thanks!