Question

Hey, everyone! :) I wrote and copyrighted another new song called "Precious Love."

As always, I would love ANY feedback (as long as it isn't rude). Once I get enough feedback, I can determine if I'll post the song itself. Thanks everyone! :D

Answer 1

Precious love that we share
Still we don't always find the time
Precious words that we use
Still we find so much to criticize
Who we have right now
Will mean the world when they're gone
And I don't wanna use these roses to say goodbye
I don't wanna use these roses to say goodbye

We're holding on to the past
Like mercy don't mean a thing no more
And some say "I'll bathe your wounds"
Some promise forever and a day so casually now
Well, can you really say that you mean it now?
Can you really say that you mean it now?
Can you really say that you mean it now?

If we only lived for today
Would you be troubled by yesterday?
If you had only one chance
Would you let go of the past?
Don't let life pass you by
Say goodbye to your pride
Love can only last if you feed it
Can you really say that you mean it?

Oh, we're holding on to the past
Like mercy don't mean a thing no more
And some say "I'll bathe your wounds"
Some promise forever and a day so casually now
Can you really say that you mean it now?
Can you really say that you mean it now?
Can you really say that you mean it now?

Precious love that we share
Still we don't always find the time
Precious words that we use
Still we find so much to criticize
Who we have right now
Will mean the world when they're gone
And I don't wanna use these roses to say goodbye
I don't wanna use these roses to say
Goodbye

© Christal Morris

Answer 2

FANTABULOUS!!!!!

Answer 3

Really? Wow... Thank you! :D I wasn't very sure, but I just wanted to see what people thought. I think the music I wrote for it is pretty, though.

Answer 4

I like it! It kinda, like in my head, I have a Goo Goo Dolls style for it XD haha but I like it :)

Answer 5

Ha ha! That's cool, the Goo Goo Dolls. What a compliment - I love 80s music! :) It is a power ballad. :) Thanks, @rebeccaskell94 !

Answer 6

:D Welcome!! I lurv the Goo Goo Dolls c: xD

Answer 7

C'mon, who doesn't? XD

Answer 8

i like it :)

Answer 9

Thank you! :3

Answer 10

I like it as well. Thumbs up! d(^_^)b

Answer 11

I think it is cool! good job

Answer 12

Thank you @LadyKatsaTheGraceling
I appreciate your feedback. :D

Answer 13

your welcome

Answer 14

Very nice

Answer 15

It is avery good song ut you cant just tell people not to write their opnion

Answer 16

Giving your opinion is alright. She just doesn't want rude comments. I think its possible to give a negative feedback without being rude. (:

Answer 17

@ALYSSA_Irene_Keeton

Answer 18

That is true but if she ever wants to do this you will deal with rudness all the time and you need to take that and prove those people wrong or ignore them :) @jazy

Answer 19

Wow, thanks guys! But @jazy was right. That's what I meant. Besides, if you look at the OpenStudy code of conduct, you will see that one of the rules is to not post rude comments. I can handle people saying that they dislike my song, or that they don't feel that I'm a good writer. I get that sometimes. But I'm still writing; it doesn't affect me like that. People are going to think what they think; I just don't appreciate rude comments; i.e. "this sucks" or 'you're lame". That is not constructive at all - it's just being mean. Do you see what I mean, @ALYSSA_Irene_Keeton ?

Answer 20

Is there a melody to it? :)

Answer 21

@jollysailorbold Yes, there is. It's a piano ballad, if that helps... I can't explain it. I'll be posting the recording soon. :)

Answer 22

Wow. That's the best one I've seen on here yet! Can't wait to hear it!

Answer 23

wow, thanks! :D You will hear it as soon as I can get it recorded and posted up. :)

Answer 24

Oh great! I'll be waiting for the upload :)

Answer 25

Ha ha, thanks. :D