Question

New improved song! (:

Answer 1

This generation
has me contemplating
about what imma do with my life.
I wanna follow my families foot steps
But I wanna rap my own reps
Be me n' show people who i am
I want people to listen to my music and say damn
I want to be the kid everyone looks up to
Show everyone what I have been through
What my sins do
I dont want people to make my mistakes
N' have their parents' hearts ache
I want my parents to stay proud
I want to hear the crowd go loud
when they listen to what i have to say
But you gotta meet me half way
Listen to my music give me one chance
instead of turning me down in advance
I know Imma girl
N’ rapping isn't supposed to be my game
But look at my last name
Durbin…
We do anything we set our minds to
As long as we stay true
To our roots
That’s how the Durbin s are
And look at me so far
I’ve made it pretty far
So if you wanna battle lets spar
Ill show you my skills
As I collect the pretty green bills
Rapping just gives me chills
Im just as good at any guy out there
So please be aware
Im commin for you all
Im gonna haul you other rappers off in a big black bag
Like the trash you write
Put your music dooks up n’ lets fight
By,
Bri Durbin ♥

Answer 2

DAUMMNN you got skill!! :D GREAT job!!

Answer 3

Damn, Sweet heart, that was Incredibly awesome.....

Answer 4

Thanks I am going to try and the into the studio asap but I have to get money first.

Answer 5

I cant post my songs xD

Answer 6

Ohh if i could I'd send you money! YOu need to!

Answer 7

This is on the borderline of normal. FORGET THAT, THIS IS JUST EPICNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111 YOU GOT MAD SKILL BRI! YOU GOT SOME MAD SKILLZ!!!

Answer 8

Ha its no prob my friend has a booth at him house imma get there in a few weeks maybe

Answer 9

This is very good! It's a lot neater than your earlier version, but I love that even though you changed some of the words around, you didn't edit the *feeling* of your original. And it's very good! I can't wait until you get studio time, this is legit stuff. :)

Answer 10

Thank you!

Answer 11

GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 12

Shanks lol

Answer 13

Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 14

woww just woww ! Amazed :D

Answer 15

lol i like the end of the song u should put this on youtube:]

Answer 16

bre gots skill

Answer 17

I will as soon as my friend gets her Ipod imma get a beat and record it for youtube.

Answer 18

nice

Answer 19

Yup (:

Answer 20

I'll bring u the sunshine
I'll comfort ur fears
I'll gather up rainbows
To chase all ur tears......
n say GOOD NIGHT dear buddies.....

Answer 21

wow:) that is awsome:)

Answer 22

Thanks!

Answer 23

absolutly great keep it up :D

Answer 24

Will do (:

Answer 25

This is really good!!!

Answer 26

Shanks! (:

Answer 27

Np I wish I could write songs lol I just come to a blank if I even try

Answer 28

Yea it comes easy to me idk why lol

Answer 29

lol I wish I could even get something

Answer 30

wonderful :)