It may be asking too much and I understand if no one has the time to read this but I have a letter I've edited. I will attach it below the post and if anyone is able, will you tell me if you think I have separated the info into paragraphs correctly? I know each should be one thought, or, if the paragraphs are just too large. Any help would be greatly appreciated, denise:) PS it's a Word 2010 doc. I think I have the punctuation correct. Feedback on any of it is welcome though:)

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It may be asking too much and I understand if no one has the time to read this but I have a letter I've edited.  I will attach it below the post and if anyone is able, will you tell me if you think I have separated the info into paragraphs correctly?  I know each should be one thought, or, if the paragraphs are just too large.  Any help would be greatly appreciated, denise:) PS it's a Word 2010 doc.  I think I have the punctuation correct.  Feedback on any of it is welcome though:)

anonymous · Answer

Here is the letter, thank you again, in advance, denise

theresa.womack · Answer

I read your letter, and it looks great! It doesn't look like it needs any corrections at all, and all of the paragraphs are separated correctly! (:

anonymous · Answer

Oh wow, you can't know how much I appreciate it this. I will go ahead and turn it in then, thank you Theresa!! Denise:)