I just completed a comparative essay on the French and American Revolutions, and I would really appreciate it if someone proofread it. I really need help with my introduction and conclusion paragraph. Please, someone help!

I'll attach the essay in a comment, thanks so much!

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I just completed a comparative essay on the French and American Revolutions, and I would really appreciate it if someone proofread it. I really need help with my introduction and conclusion paragraph. Please, someone help!

I'll attach the essay in a comment, thanks so much!

theresa.womack · Answer

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helpsos · Answer

hey :-) great job on this paper! I am not too familiar with the content because i am in grade nine therefore i was only able to fix punctuation errors. You did a great deal of research for this paper and I could tell that and it was very comparative too which was what the paper should have been. So all in all, Great Work!
p.s. the edits are highlighted in yellow :)