Question

how does this sound

through out my life I have learned many things
I learned to be me because people should love me for who I am and not who they want me to be, I learned not to listen to what people have to say because I am who I am and that's who I will stay, but the most important thing I think I have learned is to smile through the pain because one day things will be better no matter how hard it is now

Answer 1

I tihnk it's nice :D I just suggest a few changes :)

Throughout my life, I have experienced and learned many things.
I have learned to be me because people should love me for who I am and not who they want me to be. I learned [not to listen to what people have to say] (there is a such thing as constructive criticism and it is something you might want to listen to because it could help you become a better person but still stay you! You might want to change this a little) because I am who I am and that's who I will stay, but the most important thing I believe I have learned is to smile through pain. Pain is temporary and one day things will be brighter no matter how hard it is right now.

Answer 2

think*

Answer 3

thanks I will change something's

Answer 4

Alright! :)