Question

What would a good thesis statement be for a persuasive report on why Hawaii is a good place to live?

Answer 1

Hawaii is an interesting place to call home. Sometimes, it is a bustling metropolis fueled by business and commerce. Other times, it is a sleepy beach town where time stands still. No matter where you look, you'll never find another place quite like it. Hope u like it:)

Answer 2

The question to ask yourself is what would capture YOUR attention. If you've never been to Hawaii, there is no way you can write one. Try doing the research and looking at pictures. When you have an outline for the paper, a thesis statement will begin to coalesce. Think about it this way, if you could write a paper on any topic you chose, you would pick one you knew something about. You would know what you were trying to accomplish. That makes a thesis statement a lot easier to write. In other words, you need to understand the material and know what you want to say before you can create a thesis statement. Its' a process. If I give you a thesis statement, you are writing my paper. You have to have a reason to write, and that is where your thesis statement will be found.

Answer 3

"Hawii is a better place to live than most places", would be a good example for the thesis statement but I dont recamend using that because its boring and wont realy catch someones attention.... just remember that your thesis statement is the same thing as your topic sentence and your whole essay has to do with that sentence. I hope this helped some :) and please excuse my spelling.

Answer 4

Thank you all! I'm trying to get this paper done by midnight, and was just looking for some ideas. @TheMagician , what you said though really helped me!

Answer 5

I am so glad. I hope you get the chance to travel and see the world. If you really want to write, fill your world with things to write about. Enjoy your college experience. It's a great way to make memories.