Question

WISHES-
I wish u could give me ur hand
And tell me that u can be my man
Wish I could call u mine
And talk to u all the time
Wish I could wake up and see ur lovely face
But it isn’t exactly true in this case
Wish that we could spend forever together
No matter what the weather
Wish I could make all of this true
And let u no how much I really care for u.
This is a poem i made up tell me whatcha think!

Answer 1

yea i like this :)

Answer 2

SWEET! that means a lot!

Answer 3

you can write very good poems..... whos it for ;)

Answer 4

i have only wrote like 3 poems in my life!
n thats ummmm im not saying. :) haha

Answer 5

ok.......... :)

Answer 6

Here is the poem i wrote on valentines day
I miss u my baby
I love u like crazy
God showed me the sign
That u r my valentine
I’m glad I get to call u mine
I can’t wait to see u all the time
We are gonna be together forever
We will never end, yeah I said never!

Answer 7

i dont like the ending but .. yeah

Answer 8

n this is the third one i wrote-
Why do u have to keep it all bottled u inside,
I want to know all the feelings that u hide,
I wish u could put that all aside,
And let our lives collide,
I don’t want us to divide,
My arms are open wide,
Until the day that u decide.

Answer 9

i like them ....they are very good ;)

Answer 10

:) awwwwe thanks!

Answer 11

u welcome :)

Answer 12

Nice poem! Keep up the good work!

Answer 13

Thanks!

Answer 14

haha i no how that feels haha disappointing... i like it tho MEDAL!!!!

Answer 15

yeah. and awwwe thanks! my first one!

Answer 16

this is what i am working on now..
I wish it was easy.
I never thought love would be this hard.
My momma told me that love wasn’t a game
I didn’t know after I found it, my life would never be the same
If I could be there for u every second of the day
I would just to make all the pain go away
I no u’d do it for me anyway
Life has it’s up and down and I can’t ever find the words to say
How do people live life so wild and free
when i can't even get a man to get on his knee

Answer 17

@Ray-Ray you are very good a poetry

Answer 18

thanks, i have never thought so.. but when i have certain people in my life i get inspiration! :)

Answer 19

Well I think you are good at it and you should keep at it :)

Answer 20

:D lol thanks again, i will. @Michael_Angel

Answer 21

your great at poetry i think your better than me that no doubt. i like it alot

Answer 22

hahaha whatever! well we are fans of eachother! thanks girly! :P @joannaxox3

Answer 23

yep haha so true haha but mine was really lame tho i dont like writing like that

Answer 24

hahaha ur silly, dont doubt urself ur really good!

Answer 25

haha not as good as you tho lol

Answer 26

these are good

Answer 27

thanks (this is Raven/Ray-Ray)

Answer 28

your welcome im sierra

Answer 29

i no we talked the other day.

Answer 30

nice work girl :) i love it ♥

Answer 31

I LOVE IT TOO!! Ur like better then shel silverstein and thats because he's the only poetry dude i know and he sucks at depth thats why he works on toddler books ^_^

Answer 32

hahaha g, but thanks guys! :)

Answer 33

Dang CHICK!! you got skill. I wish I could write like that!!! JELLY

Answer 34

Awe thanks! :)

Answer 35

Ur welcome!

Answer 36

Mine always SUCK!!

Answer 37

Whatever!

Answer 38

ha :D

Answer 39

@AngelPSP check this out, i wrote this!

Answer 40

Nice You Seem To Be Very Proficient In Poetry. This Is Awesome It Like Talks To Me.

Answer 41

Awe. thanks! lol i ain't that good in it actually i have only wrote like 5 poems in my life.