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OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok i need help tell me wat u think and if it need edit im doing an essay on family so if yall can help me out i would realy like if u help me with this this is wat i got so far.......... Family is very special family is love caring and always there .that is how family is supposed to be. It is very important to be there for yours family. Because you will always will be there no matter what goes on in life. And should always support you no matter what. Family should mean everything to you. It is what supports who you are and were u can from. Langue’s and races support that you are

OpenStudy (anonymous):

wait this is wat i ahve so far Family is very special family is love caring and always there .that is how family is supposed to be. It is very important to be there for yours family. Because you will always will be there no matter what goes on in life. And should always support you no matter what. Family should mean everything to you. It is what supports who you are and were u can from. Langue’s and races support that you are as well. Family is a big part of your life. Most family goes to church. And most family love to just go out and have the times of their lives.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

blood is thicker than water...the differences in large and small families? just some ideas ^.^

OpenStudy (anonymous):

what?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

When you say "Family is very special family is love caring and always there" that can be a little confusing. I would personally say 'To me, family is very special. Family is always loving and there when you need them.'

OpenStudy (anonymous):

oh and make sure you capitalize at the beginning of sentences :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

oh ok thx :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

np :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Um marie ...

OpenStudy (anonymous):

when I read your thing I notice you have Langue’s and races.support that you are as well. and that kinda got off topic there mabey use ( Langue’s and races support that you are as well.)instead because you don't waNNA get off topic

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yah i t too i do that alot idk y

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