Question

I have to write a mini children's book. Any one have ideas for a monster story?

Answer 1

do like a monster who attacks gummy bears lol

Answer 2

so far I have a dog who was turned green by his scientist owner and get's so mad he turns red. how can i fit that in?

Answer 3

be like the monster ate the green doqs gummy bears and he got so mad he turned red sounds good tomii:)

Answer 4

hmm good enough!
lol thanks!

Answer 5

ur welcome!

Answer 6

im great at writing little kidy books and stuff

Answer 7

ahh you should so help me if you can :)

Answer 8

How about in the beginning u use like one upon a time in a far far away land lived a scientist with his dog (dogs name) .THey were best friends scents the scientist was little.

Answer 9

but in that far away land live the monster who ate everyones gummy bears and ......thats all igot aha

Answer 10

then yadyadyad the scientice wanted to test on his new experiment that was spouse to make his dog talk so he poured it on his dog and instead of making the dog talk it made turn GREEN !The dog got so mad that he changed colors to red.

Answer 11

im in 7th grade so im not the best

Answer 12

okay this is what i got. help? Once upon a time there was a scientist who loved to mix all sorts of things. He liked making explosions with different chemicals and making things change colors. One day he decided to make his dog change color. It worked, but the dog was furious because he didn’t like the color green! He eventually got so mad he started turning red! Fido ran away from home because all his friends starting laughing at his fur and how it changed colors. He headed into the woods to seek refuge and found and old abandoned house. There he found all sorts of scientific tools. After a week he found out how to make things change colors just like his owner. He wanted revenge so bad he started turning the bears different colors. he was also getting very hungry so he turned them into gummy bears and started eating them!

Answer 13

mabey the dog could change colors like a mood ring how he feels

Answer 14

yes!!! iluvv that so awsme good job!!!! i would give yuh a A++++

Answer 15

I like that I wanna be a proficanal righter when I grow up I right mostly chapter books

Answer 16

Good luck!

Answer 17

Wait, that's the story? It could use more detail and clarity

Answer 18

it would be good to think about the message you want to deliver to the reader (child) of this story. what do you want that child to think and feel?

Answer 19

hey ithink its a good childs book sheesh she prolly just wants to bs it like i do

Answer 20

i agree with previous poster it could use more detail and clarity. how does fido learn to use tools? and turn bears into gummies? in stories, unless a character is magical (and even if it's a dog) the actions need to make sense. maybe you could explore the dog's journey in the forest and who he meets there and how he feels and what he learns about overcoming his problem of hating his color. it is good to give a character a problem to solve and then to describe the process the character goes through to learn something important about the world or about him/herself.