Question

Here is a poem that i made for my boyfriend! (: I wana convert it into a song soon.. Tell me what y'all think..(:

Answer 1

Brown eyes
i think ii found what I’ve been looking for,
That would be you baby.
You have no idea,
How much I love you,
i see use lasting forever babe.

your lips,
your smile,
your touch,
your love.
is all i need from you.

The twinkle in your eyes,
It’s just beautiful.
They are amazing.
i just love your beautiful brown eyes.(:

Answer 2

Make a song out of it and then I will tell you what I think.

Answer 3

kk. lol.

Answer 4

Here is the song i need help with finding a melody.! (: Please help?

Answer 5

Do you have any ideas so far. I would try something but I don't want to infringe on your style.

Answer 6

like i want kinda of a country pop kind of style for the song that i put up there.

Answer 7

See I'm not very could with country. I could try something but you should really explore different melodies. The reason it's hard is because when you're writing the song, you usually have to change the lyrics a little as you go.

Answer 8

oh okay...

Answer 9

those r nice i like them :)

Answer 10

thank you Marie!

Answer 11

@TYTY777 Here is the recording of me singin! It's right above here!

Answer 12

nice

Answer 13

thanks you.

Answer 14

welcome :)

Answer 15

i like IT BOO :)

Answer 16

Thanks Binka! (: I have been writing alot lately...