Question

Absent or Here (This is a Poem)
Do You like troubling me, or do you not know what you are doing?
I don't understand your motives of hurting me.
I thought I knew you, but I realized to late that I knew nothing about you.
I see you interact with others, and think to myself why cant I get that too:(
All I ask is why.

I become successful all without you, I am strong because of you, you play a role in my development, unconsciously.
I see after you my success has settled in and ask to myself why have you showed up.
You will not be Present in my success, if you were Absent in my failure.

Answer 1

What do u think, honesty i the best policy, so follow this please-per request of me.

Answer 2

this is great!!! the only thing i would say is to put do *you* like and the you in and it will sound better its the first word on the first line

Answer 3

thank you i didnt see that ;P

Answer 4

:)

Answer 5

hey this is really good.

Answer 6

Hi, This is the Music section of OS NOT a Poem section.

Ambassador
EvonHowell

Answer 7

but poems are considered music, they can be turned into lyrics as well you know.

Answer 8

Poems are NOT Music in no way shape or form I know music very very well Poems are NOT music.

Answer 9

@EvonHowell this is a futile effort. I've tried to fight this fight many times and it goes nowhere.

Answer 10

no matter how many times you say ambassador, nobody is going to stop.

Answer 11

there are tons of other ambassadors as well u knw. not just u. plus people r gonna be pretty upset. music can also involve creativity, and it says we can post our original works, and poetry is considered it has been debated before.

Answer 12

Yes, I know there are more ambassadors than just me Yes for your original MUSIC work not Poem work.

Answer 13

uggh, okay have u tlked to other ambassadors? look how many people put up original work, that there POETRY can be turned into MUSIC lyrics, and maybe help from other people.

Answer 14

I completely agree with you @EvonHowell but you got stop throwin around the word ambassador like a power hungry d-bag. As I said before, I've tried to stop people from doing this many times before but with no luck. Everybody says they might turn their poems into music someday. I say you should wait until it's music if you post it but nobody listens. You gotta talk to the people in charge if you want something to happen.

Answer 15

Ok, yes srry for the ambassador thing just havin an issue today with some ppl where i am srry

Answer 16

I apologize, im usually a very calm person, but I don't like it when it comes to this. evon, tanner, I knw theres a lot of debate bout it. but music is in a lot of forms an speaks to people differently.

Answer 17

Well, it shouldn't be posted till it's a piece of music .

Answer 18

yes I kinda agree but some people need to express themselves. especially if its a bad day.

Answer 19

That's what all those other online social networks are for. This site is to stimulate minds and encourage education. You can tell the world your problems through poetry on facebook or myspace or twitter or tumblr or countless other places not openstudy.

Answer 20

im not sayin tht. some people need to get thei words out and expess themselves.

Answer 21

Why are they doing that here? This place is for critiquing of musical creations and musical discussion not to express yourself.

Answer 22

critique an help from other students like them tanner. they maybe want help they probably don't know how to ask.

Answer 23

you know wat I gotta go, my moms headin to class an I need to watch my brothers. talk to other ambassadors, I will nicely put it. I don't want this group deleted all right.

Answer 24

Hi, first I want to say that I apologize for posting this I realize that it is not meant to be here, even though most poetry is a form of music but that is not what this music section is for I understand and sincerely apologize and thnx to those that liked it=)

Answer 25

brain wreck dont worry about it.