Question

My heart raced when i seen you,
You caused my too loose my breathe.
You love him, i love you.
Why is that so complicated?
I mean were like fire and rain,
you can drive me insane, but i cant stay mad at you for anything,
Were from venus and mars,
were like diffrent stars,
But your the harmony to every song i sing,
I need you like a heart needs a beat,

Answer 1

♥♥If you read this you are in my heart forever and always♥!:)

Answer 2

AWE :D

Answer 3

XD

Answer 4

IM INYOUR HEART NOW LOL

Answer 5

quite a few grammatical errors. I'm not trying to offend you but if you ever made this into a song, you might want to get those fixed.

Answer 6

haha tanner Nice:D

Answer 7

Excellent, Sweetheart!!!
@tanner23456 is right, but don't make this a song, keep it as poem and just fix like it is;P

Answer 8

very nice :)

Answer 9

very very beautiful. :)

Answer 10

Thats very nice. :)