Question

Anyone thnk this is okay? ''you''
Your smile is like the sun,
With warmth spreading all around,
And here i feel it with my feet on the ground,

Like the eyes upon your soul,
I cannot look away,
Just as a storm is coming across the bay.

With your arms around me,
It is all in security,
And I finally feel safe in your company.

You laugh freely,
And it fills me with joy,
For right now I'm just a girl and you a boy.

When i feel you kiss me nigh,
I know my dreams are guarded,
When my shining knight is by,
And that is all i could hope for when i look in your eyes.
i need some

Answer 1

awesome i love its touching

Answer 2

thank you :)

Answer 3

This really has great song potential all you need is a melody and a chorus and your there.

Answer 4

tnks tanner i havnt really learned chords yet in class. :)

Answer 5

What class are you in?

Answer 6

beginning music theory. i stated in 4th quit in 5th overloaded. just started back in 8th. still playing though.

Answer 7

oh cool. Well you don't need chords to make a melody just pick a key. I personally like minor keys.

Answer 8

yeah me to i luv the d string but the lowness of g is great for melody's. im workin on the isle for a dance at my prom.

Answer 9

That's cool. Yeah I would say just play around til you hear something you like.