Hi Everyone, I am doing an assignment today (editing)and if someone could take a look at the following sentence, and let me know if it looks ok, I would so appreciate it:) Denise, Here it is: I would have to drive at least 5 miles further to school, and many students would have to spend, altogether, too much time every day traveling back and forth.

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anonymous · Answer

It looks fine to me

anonymous · Answer

So you wouldn't make any changes?
:)

anonymous · Answer

nope:)

anonymous · Answer

the altogether being set off by commas had me concerned.

anonymous · Answer

Ok, I appreciate your help Slash:) Have a great day! Denise

anonymous · Answer

your'e welcome:) you too!!!