I have another sentence I would like input on if anyone has a moment. Thank you in advance for any help:) Denise, Here it is: If our computer training program is moved to the school in Fall Brook many of us would be seriously affected.

I should have asked for punctuation help. That city-name, Fall Brook, looks odd to me but I don't think the instructor expects us to do anything with a fictitious town. I am tempted to write Fallbrook but who could know:) Denise

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I have another sentence I would like input on if anyone has a moment.  Thank you in advance for any help:) Denise, Here it is:  If our computer training program is moved to the school in Fall Brook many of us would be seriously affected.

I should have asked for punctuation help.  That city-name, Fall Brook, looks odd to me but I don't think the instructor expects us to do anything with a fictitious town.  I am tempted to write Fallbrook but who could know:) Denise

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I am thinking possibly, quotation marks around the words "training program" or maybe a comma after computer?  Thanks again, Denise

anonymous · Answer

I'll be away for a bit, but I shall return;) Denise