Question

Something I just came up with, what U think??


This is how it’s going down,
You can’t fight against the crown,
Fear of YAHWEH will save you now

Man has been deceived,
By hasantan and his evil deeds,
A change of heart is what you need,

Maybe this is what you seek,
Continuously showing that you’re weak,
The strong will live in peace

The kingdom is where you’ll be,
Torah in your heart; you’ll see,
Have faith and you’ll receive

Life!

Answer 1

:D i like it:D:D:D

Answer 2

thanks :P

Answer 3

yup:D

Answer 4

this is really nice.

Answer 5

its really good...

Answer 6

thanks people :D

Answer 7

welcome:

Answer 8

this is amazing :)

Answer 9

thanks, lol

Answer 10

Your Welcome :)

Answer 11

this sucks im plyin bruh its gud man

Answer 12

thanks bruh :D

Answer 13

This is Dope and True keep up the good work man:)

Answer 14

thanks man, I appreciate

Answer 15

Honesty is the best policy they say, good job i guess;)

Answer 16

thanks ^^

Answer 17

My pleasure=)

Answer 18

:P

Answer 19

AWESOME!! Good job!

Answer 20

thanks

Answer 21

your welcome

Answer 22

The rhymes are are too cookie cutter, it's like rhyming "tag" with "flag" and "bag", it is too blatant and bland, and predictable...

imo

Listen to some B.I.G. or Eminem, when they rhyme stuff you hear it and think it would not rhyme but they kill it

Listen to Lose Yourself to get a feel for how to rhyme like a boss without going "door floor more sore gore bore"

Answer 23

I see you're new..........

Welcome to OpenStudy, @churrity !

Answer 24

Are you a Nazarene or a Jew?!? :D (Im one of them)