Question

So I am writing a persuasive essay. The topic is asking whether you are for or against schools. I am choosing to be for schools. I support the education system! I am just having trouble thinking of points to include as my body paragraphs, any suggestions?

Answer 1

Knowledge(?)
Experience
[what kind of examples like the ones above or more specific?]

Answer 2

Children aren't as exposed to the bad influences.

Answer 3

Why is the education system important,
what will happen without the education system
Is there an alternative...thats to back up the otherside..
Why do you need the education system when you can learn in life
Would there be jobs without the education system

Answer 4

would it be harder to get a job?

Answer 5

Actually there are proofs that when children are Home-schooled it's easier for them to find jobs.

Answer 6

there is also proof that its easier for kids to get into a better college...but i think he is talking about education system in general...not homeschooling..that is part of the education system...i think the subject is should we have to go to school

Answer 7

Now..I am confused..lol @cc

Answer 8

The points I have listen are:
Education will pay off when people go into the work-force
I like @OurLittleTalks♥ you had a good one about bad influences, mind if I use it?
and then I am stuck

Answer 9

fewl its easy...its just words on paper...i could write a page or two for u in 30 to 45 minutes...but that would be cheating

Answer 10

@SnuggieLad lets put it this way, I am for educations and schooling..eh?

Answer 11

@karatechopper You can use it that's why I wrote it haha

Answer 12

I really wouldn't even accept your paragraph. I don't like taking others work and calling it my own..personally it makes me guilty. And I am quite fond of writing..soo :)

Answer 13

what would happen whithout it...what about the knowledge it teaches..how would we get it otherwise...how would that knowledge get to the masses

Answer 14

@SnuggieLad ^

Answer 15

haha okay :) @OurLittleTalks♥

Answer 16

Well I am asking myself..what would happen without it already..I just can't find good points..I want to put one about getting a social life..but I think that one ties into the work-force one.

Answer 17

(:

Answer 18

oh...what about mine...best my answer lol i thought i did good

Answer 19

How would we get knowledge without education? I already have that as my counterclaim haha

Answer 20

Any other suggestions?

Answer 21

ok...this isnt a challenge...
here is a paragraph...
Without the educational system how would we get education to the masses? How would people be able to advance technology without the basic fundimental knowladge given in school? How would we be able to advance the community without the knowledge of how to connect with people. Understand that without education we are nothing but sitting ducks bound to spend all eternity doing the same things the same way going in a infanant paradox. How can there be life without learning.