Question

can someone help edit my summary?

Answer 1

Yes.

Answer 2

post it...

Answer 3

Where is it? we cant help unless we can see it.

Answer 4

I find the reading journals to be helpful, because it cleared my mind and opened my knowledge to new quotes I haven’t heard before. Some quotes are very straightforward and easily understood, while other are just boring which makes it hard to respond and reflect to. Regardless, I still managed to fulfill the requirement, because I wanted to earn an A for the class and get into the habit of writing my ideas and feelings down on paper. Not only that, but knowing that writing your thoughts, ideas and feelings on a regular basis is guaranteed to make one a smarter and stronger writer. And since I don’t usually write my thoughts down on paper much, I decided to use this journal as a way to allow me to become comfortable and ease my struggles when it comes to writing. Furthermore, I actually found it a great tool, because its not about perfectionism rather its more about just getting your feelings down and expressing yourself without worries and stress. I motivated by self to do the assignment by reminding my self that it could benefit me to become a better writer, its a requirement, and most importantly because I wanted to earn a deserving grade in the class. At times the reading journal was easy and other it was a bit stressful because like I said some quotes were meaningless and I couldn’t provide much insight on them. Therefore, i noticed it stressful to finish a two page reflection on a single quote in which I didn’t find useful nor clear. However, there were a few quotes which I found very relate able and simply true, such as Walt Disney, Malcolm X, and Margaret Thatcher once. They were very true and understood about pursuing ones dreams and a successful education. I learned new quotes and was inspired to get into the habit of enjoying and feeling comfortable with writing. I just hope that instead of responding to quotes we can just do free writes instead, that way its less stressful and a better option to put down our personal thought and feelings down with ease and weightless.

Answer 5

here u go..

I find the reading journals to be helpful, because it cleared my mind and opened my knowledge to new quotes I haven’t heard before. Some quotes are very straightforward and easily understood, while other is just boring which makes it hard to respond and reflect to. Regardless, I still managed to fulfill the requirement, because I wanted to earn an A for the class and get into the habit of writing my ideas and feelings down on paper. Knowing that writing your thoughts, ideas, and feelings on a regular basis is guaranteed to make one a smarter and stronger writer. And since I don’t usually write my thoughts down on paper much, I decided to use this journal as a way to allow me to become comfortable and ease my struggles when it comes to writing. Furthermore, I actually found it a great tool, because it’s not about perfectionism rather it’s more about just getting your feelings down and expressing yourself without worries and stress. I motivated by self to do the assignment by reminding myself that it could benefit me to become a better writer, it’s a requirement, and most importantly because I wanted to earn a deserving grade in the class. At times the reading journal was easy and other it was a bit stressful because like I said some quotes were meaningless and I couldn’t provide much insight on them. Therefore, I noticed it stressful to finish a two page reflection on a single quote in which I didn’t find useful or clear. However, there were a few quotes which I found very relate able and simply true, such as Walt Disney, Malcolm-X, and Margaret Thatcher once. They were very true and understood about pursuing ones dreams and a successful education. I learned new quotes and was inspired to get into the habit of enjoying and feeling comfortable with writing. I just hope that instead of responding to quotes we can just do free writes instead, that way its less stressful and a better option to put down our personal thought and feelings down with ease and weightless.

Answer 6

still sounds the same Raven5...

Answer 7

umm a lot of ur its needed ' in them and then one sentence u had was messed up hold on i will copy n show u..

Answer 8

"Not only that, but knowing that writing your thoughts, ideas and feelings on a regular basis is guaranteed to make one a smarter and stronger writer." this is what u had... i switched it to "Knowing that writing your thoughts, ideas, and feelings on a regular basis is guaranteed to make one a smarter and stronger writer." the grammer in urs was not exactly correct.

Answer 9

oh i see, other than that is it okay?

Answer 10

yeah! :)

Answer 11

did you get this edited? if not gimme like 5 mins and ill have it done

Answer 12

but if it has been already then i wont worry about it.

Answer 13

if you can help too, that would be great!

Answer 14

ok gimme 5 mins.

Answer 15

i tried boom but its great 2 have us both so have at it! :)

Answer 16

appreciate the help Raven!

Answer 17

I found the reading journals to be helpful because it cleared my mind and opened my knowledge to new quotes I haven’t heard before. Some quotes are very straightforward and easily understood, while other are just boring, which makes it hard to respond and reflect to. Regardless, I still managed to fulfill the requirement, because I wanted to earn an A for the class and get into the habit of writing my ideas and feelings down on paper. Not only that, but knowing that writing your thoughts, ideas, and feelings on a regular basis is guaranteed to make one a smarter and stronger writer. Since I don’t usually write my thoughts down on paper much, I decided to use this journal as a way to allow me to become comfortable and ease my struggles when it comes to writing. Furthermore, I actually found it a great tool, because its not about perfectionism, rather it’s more about just getting your feelings down and expressing yourself without worries and stress.
I motivated myself to do the assignment by thinking that it could benefit me to become a better writer. It’s a requirement, and most importantly I wanted to earn a deserving grade in the class. At times, the reading journal was easy, and other times, it was a bit stressful because like I said, some quotes were meaningless and I couldn’t provide much insight on them. Therefore, i noticed it stressful to finish a two page reflection on a single quote in which I didn’t find useful or clear.
However, there were a few quotes which I found very relatable and simply true, such as Walt Disney, Malcolm X, and Margaret Thatcher Once. They were very true, and I understood about pursuing ones dreams and a successful education. I learned new quotes, and was inspired to get into the habit of enjoying and feeling comfortable with writing. I just hope that instead of responding to quotes, we can just do free writes That way it’s less stressful, and a better option to put down our personal thoughts and feelings with ease and weightless.

Answer 18

ignore that first one heres the right one.

Answer 19

I found the reading journals to be helpful because it cleared my mind and opened my knowledge to new quotes I haven’t heard before. Some quotes are very straightforward and easily understood, while other are just boring, which makes it hard to respond and reflect to. Regardless, I still managed to fulfill the requirement, because I wanted to earn an A for the class and get into the habit of writing my ideas and feelings down on paper. Not only that, but knowing that writing your thoughts, ideas, and feelings on a regular basis is guaranteed to make one a smarter and stronger writer. Since I don’t usually write my thoughts down on paper much, I decided to use this journal as a way to allow me to become comfortable and ease my struggles when it comes to writing. Furthermore, I actually found it a great tool, because its not about perfectionism, rather it’s more about just getting your feelings down and expressing yourself without worries and stress. I motivated myself to do the assignment by thinking that it could benefit me to become a better writer. It’s a requirement, and most importantly I wanted to earn a deserving grade in the class. At times, the reading journal was easy, and other times, it was a bit stressful because like I said, some quotes were meaningless and I couldn’t provide much insight on them. Therefore, i noticed it stressful to finish a two page reflection on a single quote in which I didn’t find useful or clear. However, there were a few quotes which I found very relatable and simply true, such as Walt Disney, Malcolm X, and Margaret Thatcher Once. They were very true, and I understood about pursuing ones dreams and a successful education. I learned new quotes, and was inspired to get into the habit of enjoying and feeling comfortable with writing. I just hope that instead of responding to quotes, we can just do free writes That way it’s less stressful, and a better option to put down our personal thoughts and feelings with ease and weightless.

Answer 20

thanks

Answer 21

Your welcome. Your paper was enjoyable to read :)

Answer 22

lol I try to make it...

Answer 23

it just that sometimes I feel like i need someone to proofread and edit my writing afterwards

Answer 24

Yes, which was very wise becasue i did find some things wrong and that needed correcting like you liked to use one word twice one sentence sometimes i use a thesaurus t ocome up with new words that mean the same but are different.

Answer 25

If you need more papers proofread please message me and i can help.

Answer 26

sure, thanks for the offer!

Answer 27

Any time.☺