Question

poem hope enjoy:)

Answer 1

All this pain
make it go away
cant help but complain
life feels so gray
did I make a bad choice?
Is the pain a punishment?
I feel they don’t hear my voice
pain made a commitment
to torture me forever
bring me peace never
I made a mistake I understand
shouldn't of continued
baseball bat to my stomach it got slammed
I won but collapsed
no police please
lets just go home
the pains to go away I plead
blood in my mouth on my way home
wash up and ignore
parents dont know
condition poor
I dont feel the pain of the blows

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Very Nice

Answer 4

thanks lol i sort of liked it too lol

Answer 5

nice one.

Answer 6

thanks :)

Answer 7

welcome :)

Answer 8

good job ;)

Answer 9

thank you

Answer 10

great job!

Answer 11

Very nice!

Answer 12

gracias!! :)

Answer 13

nice work :) A+

Answer 14

thank you haha my first A+ in years lol

Answer 15

lol ur wecome :D

Answer 16

Theres a lot of emotion in this. Is this a personal experience or a made up event?

Answer 17

personal :) painful personal experience

Answer 18

Oh, really? Well, should I say sorry for your suffering?

Answer 19

yeah...no dont worry about it i feel better im healing. i feel much better

Answer 20

really very nic poem........:-))

Answer 21

thanks you i sort of liked it to. :)

Answer 22

ur welcome................

Answer 23

haha whats with the dots? i think your singing or thinkin lol

Answer 24

both ////.........................lol

Answer 25

lol wow clever lol haha

Answer 26

thank you..............lol

Answer 27

Wow... this is AMAZING... and I saw you said it was a persnaly expirience so Im sorry about that. THis poem is great. keep up the awesome work:)

Answer 28

thanks yep all my poems are personal so yeah