Question

I'm writing a paper on is corporal punishment an appropriate parent-discipline technique? Would this be a good subject and thesis for what I'm writing? There are different kinds of corporal punishment being used in our daily life situations such as spanking or beating your child and would it be an appropriate parent-discipline technique to use in daily lives, so our children can use manners and have respect when they get older.

Answer 1

It seems to be a little rocky, try to fix the grammar and be a little more clear as well as brief in pinpointing your thesis.