Question

will you read this and give me your opinion?
i had to rewrite this paragraph in 3 different genres.

Answer 1

@singlesixx

Answer 2

Where is the paragraph dear.

Answer 3

paragraph i had to rewrite:
Robert met Nicole at the corner. It had been a long time; there was much to catch up on. They walked together down the crowded streets. Once again they’d be together, for a while at least,

Romance:
It was a windy day. Robert knew he had to meet his dear, sweet Nicole at the corner to take her out to lunch. It had only been a few hours since she left for work, but being ripped apart from the love of his life for so long felt like centuries. Watching the clock as the time slowly crawled by, seemingly teasing him, the smell of her floral perfume still lingered on his skin, driving him mad. Finally, it was time to meet her. He couldn’t wait to gently wrap his arms around her, taking in her sweet sent. He saw his princess, bounding to her he noted her long, lush hair blowing in the wind, her perfect, beautiful smile glowing as their eyes met... Once again they would be together, even if only for a moment, it was enough for him.

Science Fiction:
Robert jumped on his hover board, in a hurry to meet Nicole, his best friend since birth. It had been a long time, months since they had last seen each other since he had left for college. His board felt slightly unsteady, wobbling as he first got on, but he didn’t care. This is Nicole we are talking about! They had so much to catch up on; college, new friends, (Possible boyfriend?) work, family, friends, dorm mates? Gliding along the grid, (hover boards are magnetic. There was a grid along the underground of the city for hover boards to connect to...) finally, he saw her. Standing at the corner, hair tied in a high pony tail, black skinny jeans and a hoodie, hover board in hand. Scratch a coffee date- Today, it looked like they were going on an adventure, off the grid.
Fantasy:
Robert had to hurry. It was time to meet Nicole in the circle of protection. They were going to go on an expedition, to the 4th dimension. Searching through his spell chamber, shoving precious spell after precious spell into his pockets, he finally came upon transportamus expelliamus, a delicious teleportation spell. Throwing his head back he let the warm, sugary liquid drip down his throat. All he could think about was Nicole. They would soon be together, on an adventure never experienced before.

Answer 4

These are wonderful! I don't have any suggestions for you. Amazing writing.