Question

Could someone please help me proofread my expository essay rough draft? I'm not very good at writing essays so please point out any mistakes. The essay would be too long to post here so I'll paste a PasteBin link to it. PasteBin formatted the essay weird so please just bare with me: http://pastebin.com/g2fFgLqu

Answer 1

I'm taking a look at it now. :)

Answer 2

Thanks. I don't know if I repeated the word "student" too much.

Answer 3

Okay, I'm going to try and send you corrections on with a word document. I'll give you the link so you can watch as I correct. I just hope the link works!

Answer 4

Thanks!

Answer 5

Okay: Link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g4lgaGxr0XtqC_z7gpUSgdWBzz1Czv3XGZq56J9V70k/edit

Answer 6

I sent an access request.

Answer 7

oh sorry, just a second

Answer 8

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g4lgaGxr0XtqC_z7gpUSgdWBzz1Czv3XGZq56J9V70k/edit

Answer 9

Okay, for now that's all the time I have. I will go through your entire essay by the end of the day.

Answer 10

Okay. Thanks. With your comments I think I could go through it and edit it a bit myself. Thanks for your help.

Answer 11

You're welcome. I did more corrections if you want to go look at that now.