Question

I was wondering if this is a good thesis statement? Corporal punishment attributes to effective ways for parents to discipline their child, also it can fall into abuse, and these days adults are afraid to punish there kids.

Answer 1

I would say more of Corpal punishment is the reason kids are how they are. now a d ays Because for one it grabs the readers atteion more and for two if it was like it used to be when a kid back talked they would get slapped across the face which I personally think is how it should be! Hope this helps :)

Answer 2

Thanks