Question

Finished another Song it'a called Forever Us... (: Finally finished the song.. I hope y'all like it.

Answer 1

Verse 1
It might be coincidence,
But I would call it fate.
Something so important,
I know you can relate.
But I feel like I am falling
And I know that it’s with you.
You make me feel like a kid in a candy story,
Begging for more.
And im glad that there’s nothing I can do.
Oh baby I feel our love is true.
Chorus
Nobody can ever make me feel,
The way you make me feel.
Oh baby a future with you can be so real.
I always love to feel your touch.
This is forever us!
Oh baby this isn’t a lie.
I think about you all the time.
This will be forever us.
Verse 2
I love your eyes,
I love your smile,
I love your touch.
I love how you call me beautiful every morning.
I love how you always make me happy.
Even though we may have our up's &&' downs, they help make us stronger.
I truly do love you.
Spending the rest of my life with you is what i see.
Baby i wanna be your bride to be.
Chorus
Nobody can ever make me feel,
The way you make me feel.
Oh baby a future with you can be so real.
I always love to feel your touch.
This is forever us!
Oh baby this isn’t a lie.
I think about you all the time.
This will be forever us.

Answer 2

like it

Answer 3

thank you Binka! (:

Answer 4

Aww I love it Jenny :)

Answer 5

welcome babyma

Answer 6

Thanks Kaela! (:

Answer 7

haha your welcome :D

Answer 8

@TYTY777

Answer 9

Jenny I would say that this is one of your best songs yet that you have written.. Im already singin it in my head.. great job :)

Answer 10

Its Great!!!!!!!!

Answer 11

@Des12 - Aweee thank you Sis! I had alittle help from @Sara7245 but i did quite a bit of it too. But i just put my heart into this. That's all what i do in my songs.

Answer 12

Destiny - Thanks you! (:

Answer 13

I need a beat for it.. I'm singing this for the next writers read meeting forsure.!

Answer 14

good you should

Answer 15

Ever since i was with Tyler i have been writing songs like crazy! He is my inspiration for my songs. (: Ughh i just love hims.(:

Answer 16

awe* love dont it get to us all babyma?....

Answer 17

(: Binka!

Answer 18

babyma;D

Answer 19

Do you have a beat for this yet? Make sure anything you write you get copyrighted asap as ppl do see and if they like they will steal!! This is really great, and as a DJ I would definitely play this. :)

Answer 20

Ooh, is there a melody to it?

Answer 21

@Jenn0814 - Thank you ! (: If anyone steals it i will be mad.

Answer 22

Jolly - No not yet.. I've been tryna figure that out.

Answer 23

Here you go, hun♥