Question

idk if ive put this poem already but here it is....

Answer 1

Lies

I feel like a lie
I don’t know what to say
I just want to cry
all he says is okay
is he mine
or is he hers
love level negative nine
our love looks like blurs
I'm to weak to continue to look
need someone to pick me up
my heart he took
looking for strength in a cup
hold me don’t let go
my emotions are bare
I'm so cold i feel like snow
was your love a dare
loved the way you made me feel
special and free of fear
give me some time for my heart to heal
i need you here
i need some to
say baby ill be alright
i need someone to
hold me through the night
tell me you'll be him
repair my heart
my light is so dim
say well never be apart
do you like me?
no...i love you
do you want me?
no....i need you
will you cry if i leave?
no....i will die
my pain do you see?
baby just don't cry

Answer 2

it is very good!!!

Answer 3

oh thank you @jack63

Answer 4

wow awesome joanna. :)