Question

If only you could see, what's happening to me, you would see the hurt in my eyes...

Is this good or not?

Answer 1

How is that related to music ?

Answer 2

It is good because presence and interaction are the two forms that allow feelings to flow between people. A mere distant connection or relationship cannot beat presence and interaction. Additionally, eye contact is a strong method to convey feelings, so your statement has context and content. It would be considered a good sentence.

Answer 3

@AravindG in the music group you post poems and music and anythign that is considered an origional work of art like poems or paintings or somethign you made

Answer 4

and ya it really attracts the feeling like dean said its really awesome

Answer 5

melissa its just fine and it does belong. SELF EXPRESSION ROCKS!!!

Answer 6

Thank you!! This means a lot to me you guys! I appreciate your guy's opinion!! And I'm trying to write a song...so thats why I put it up here...and yes this is an original work!

Answer 7

awesome for you Melissa. :)

Answer 8

Sounds poetic. It's very good. Personal experience or fiction?

Answer 9

Personal expierence

Answer 10

Really? Oh, I'm sorry (should I be sorry, you tell me)

Answer 11

Lets just say it hurt really bad :(

Answer 12

Was it a boy that did it?

Answer 13

Ya...

Answer 14

Ya want me to beat him up, cause I would I promise you. :) Smile it's good for you. I'm sure he doesn't know what he's lost.

Answer 15

@chaylacryder haha thanks! And he was like my best friend but then he ditched me!

Answer 16

weah did u check my poe? I want tta knock tht guy out. he kissed two of my girlfriends. an it was just to get im a better position. Id gladly knock im out too. ;)

Answer 17

darn it sorry poem.

Answer 18

haha its ok!@Poetrylover

Answer 19

Boys ( no offense to them) are not that smart. :)

Answer 20

I totally agree

Answer 21

Agreed @Poetrylover :D

Answer 22

lol, there a difference guys, and men. :)

Answer 23

I guess thats true

Answer 24

guys are jerks an clueless, men are appreciative and treat you with respect, hopefully I have a man. your friend maybe a guy.

Answer 25

hahaha...I don't talk to him anymore...or at least he doesn't talk to me

Answer 26

then theres boys where they act like 5 year olds an cant decide to be either so they screw around with each other. ;)

Answer 27

There is a definite difference between boys and men. (btw... go for the men, not kids or men that act like kids) ;)

Answer 28

lol!!! You guys are amazing!

Answer 29

yep otherwise if you mary an hav kids seems lke your the only parent. lots of listening relationships and w/guys for 15 years. tons of crushes. ;)

Answer 30

surprised no man or guy is tryin to defened their manhood. :)

Answer 31

Oh my gosh!! I love it!!! You are so awesome!!!!!

Answer 32

Random question, everyone here is single right?

Answer 33

ur welcome, ive delt quite a bit w/guys,men,boys an read about them. kind of single I might be getting in a relationship with a man.

Answer 34

Okay, make sure you tell us if anything bad goes wrong. :D

Answer 35

I'm single and yes you have to tell us!!!

Answer 36

If you didn't understand that I think relationships are bad and can only get worse. No offense :)

Answer 37

k I don't think so. hes really sweet an funny. got a date next wen, but really cheesy, at my bro's b-day party. chuckie cheese. funny thing they hav the same b-day. ;)

Answer 38

Thats strange, and kind of ironic. Hope you have fun!! :)

Answer 39

yea I think I will. :) u hav any bad relationships?

Answer 40

Who're you talking to?

Answer 41

both of u guys.

i had a crush on my best friends ex, an she was tryin to get bck together, i backed off. we were all at a summer camp for a week, but other grls talkin s**t about her.

Answer 42

Oh, okay. I've never dated. That must really suck. I appreciate the fact that you didn't actually say that word. :)

Answer 43

That sucks!! I've never had a boyfriend before or gone on a date...I guess I'm just scared

Answer 44

Why're you scared?

Answer 45

we tlked on the fone till November, since then nothing. :( hes a sweet guy and i didn't want either of them hurt. welcome i don't really cuss much. this is my first date and i never actually been in a relationship either. don't be scared i was before, this jump is worth it.

Answer 46

Can I ask you how old you are?

Answer 47

me im 15 freshman.

Answer 48

I'm scared of getting my heart broken/getting hurt

Answer 49

I have religious reasons for not dating. And I wouldn't want to anyway. Boys are cruel.

Answer 50

Really? I want a relationship

Answer 51

i look older and act a whole lot mature then other kids. don't be scared theres a lot of things to be scared of, but you wont know if don't try. go for men, boys an guys are cruel.

Answer 52

How old are you Melissa?

Answer 53

15

Answer 54

plus, there are few guys that act lke jerks when their friends are around.

Answer 55

That is very true! A lot of the guys I know are like that:/

Answer 56

Everyones older than me! I agree with you @Poetrylover

Answer 57

But either way their jerks

Answer 58

How old are you? @chaylacryder

Answer 59

12, almost 13

Answer 60

yea, guys at my middle school, were complete idiots. but they were a few decent guys.

Answer 61

Thats good for you. Where are you two from?

Answer 62

tracy, californa.

Answer 63

I'm from California

Answer 64

Where????

Answer 65

I'm from arizona :)

Answer 66

cool, were kinda near each other, only a state away. :)

Answer 67

Yeah. FINALLY!!!! ;)

Answer 68

lol. hes falling in luv with me, hes falling in luv with me, hes falling in luv with me. and im falling in luv with him!!!!

Answer 69

Awwwww xD. how do you know?

Answer 70

cause he gets distracted when he talks to me, he likes my smile, and makes me laugh an blush. :)

Answer 71

Thats definitely something close to love, or a very strong like. ;D

Answer 72

That's so cute!!

Answer 73

omg!! it's a beautiful song waiting to happen... C:

Answer 74

i luv his voice, the way he smiles and talks. an i luv the way his eyes look, hey be back in ten.

Answer 75

Its a good start isn't it @TechGeek? See, @Melissajoy you've got a fan club already. :D

Answer 76

Thanks! @TechGeek and @chaylacryder

Answer 77

Thats really cute @Poetrylover. I hope it works out for you two. :)

Answer 78

hahahah you got a fan club Melissa :DD

Answer 79

Anytime @Melissajoy :)

Answer 80

:)

Answer 81

Can't dispute that yet, now can you melissa? ;)

Answer 82

haha I guess not

Answer 83

good, no denying ;D

Answer 84

hahaha!!!

Answer 85

okay im bck, thnks guys i really hope it works out. :)

Answer 86

So does everyone else. Right @Melissajoy?

Answer 87

whos got wat fan club. oh @Danny_Boy had his own photography fan club, i gotta go luv u girls. ;)

Answer 88

Well good for him. :)

Answer 89

Ahah I actually have to go guys!! Ttyl!!

Answer 90

bye :(

Answer 91

awwww okay. ttyl @Melissajoy

Answer 92

@Poetrylover you still there?

Answer 93

hi :D

Answer 94

hey @Danny_Boy

Answer 95

hahah hey :D

Answer 96

I hear you've got a fan club. Congrats!!! :)