Question

Paper, edit please? @dumbsearch2

Answer 1

what is the format, exactly ?

Answer 2

Its research outline/design. oops! I accidentally open the wrong version let me put up the ne

Answer 3

Here the new version

Answer 4

Hey dumbsearch 2 are you not going to continue to look at my paper?

Answer 5

?

Answer 6

did you finish checking it?

Answer 7

hmn

Answer 8

Does this mean, we have to find the mistakes(grammatical ones)?

Answer 9

yes, I greatly appreciate

Answer 10

I check it myself, but I would like for other to see for mistake that I might have over looked

Answer 11

One mistake in one line?

Answer 12

or can it be 100s :P ?

Answer 13

yes
I think he wants all of them

Answer 14

Oh!!! :( it will take time for me.Wait

Answer 15

ok, thanks mathslover and dumbsearc2

Answer 16

At least there are no mistakes I can find in 1st para

Answer 17

Is everything else all right?

Answer 18

Yes i think

Answer 19

so there might be grammatical mistake you didn't see?

Answer 20

Cant say.

Answer 21

Probability = 1/3

Answer 22

what?

Answer 23

^ of getting a mistake , probability = 1/3

Answer 24

omg

Answer 25

what for the omg?

Answer 26

1/3 prob of being rite ;p

Answer 27

did you finish check my paper though?

Answer 28

Too many uses of the word "Furthermore". Use other words to begin your paragraph. It just makes your paper bland and uninspiring. In relation to your ideas and syntax, I haven't thoroughly read it but it seems pretty good. But if you want your paper checked and all, you should really ask your teacher or lecturer.