Question

i never wrote some poetry in some weeks lol..
this is how i feel right now,


its all like a secret,
a secret thats locked,
all pocketed in this memory,
all sorrow then hidden in my soul for eternity,
smiling with all the dreams ,
him and my enemy,
i wish it could all end,
but dont know if there ever was a middle
it was either him or me,
it all holds and blinds me in this thing i called my memory,
i may always smile,
behind my seeing smile is the tears and the pain, i know it will change , but all the scars that will remain, it will stay the same, its not the song, its the lyrics, i feel like im in a broken mirror, shattered but not broken all the way, with all my bitterness and all my shame, wishing it all came at once, so the tears dont stay in and explode, i remember everything from the back of my hand, and i remember everything said,
it all lead to the feeling, no trust, but it amazed me, seeing me like this, all felt like a secret, one day will be set free.

Answer 1

wow. there's some deep stuff in this, you are really good, just to let you know. this is just. wow. i can't even describe this! that's how good it is!

Answer 2

Thats awesome. Do you enjoy poetry?

Answer 3

thanks @andriod09
i respect u for reading it , thanks<3

Answer 4

yeah i love poetry, but i never wrote it in some weeks so, then i descided to do it aagain.

Answer 5

oh cool. your very good :)

Answer 6

i like poetry, i just can't write it. i suck at the rhyming part. i can do haiku's easily tho, they don't have to rhyme. xD but its still good, and trust me, even though times seems dark now, they will be better in the future. somethign to look forward to.

Answer 7

Poetry doesn't have to rhyme @andriod09. You should post some of your poems. :)

Answer 8

nooo. i suck at it.

Answer 9

Doubtful :)

Answer 10

lol shutup and post some, they dont have to rhyme, they just have to say what u feel, dont rhyme , just say how u feel, listen to music while typing it, thats what i do, and it helps me find everything ..

Answer 11

I agree with @seiga. You really should @andriod09. :D

Answer 12

shutup and post some or im not going to be ur friend:/ lol:/ ur making me sad!

Answer 13

this is really fracken pretty just syain k now

Answer 14

Really good and I also think @andriod09 should write some poetry I also think you should put ths in the writing section I think they will much apperciate this

Answer 15

@jes230 what do u think?

Answer 16

Whose @jes230?

Answer 17

my best friend<3

Answer 18

wow really good this is how poetry should be its conveying deep emotions that are hard to describe out loud i like it A LOT very good bestie

Answer 19

Ohhhhhh, HI @jes230

Answer 20

thanks @jes230

Answer 21

lol hello @chaylacryder

Answer 22

lol

Answer 23

your welcome @seiga

Answer 24

~

Answer 25

@jes230 yw

Answer 26

@seiga omg they r blue my fav color lol

Answer 27

lol..yeah..;p

Answer 28

i like that seiga. the first one is cute. xD

Answer 29

ahah yeah i know right<3

Answer 30

i really want a tattoo of that aahah:P

Answer 31

sharpie

Answer 32

seiga reply to my pm please.

Answer 33

WHY DID U ASK ME THAT?CAN'T U SEE THAT THATS THE REASON. THAT EVERY SINGLE THING LEAD UP TO THE QUESTION U ASKED ME, UR HONESTLY MAKING ME CRY, WHY THE HECK WOULD U ASK ME THAT?OH SO U COULD JUDGE?SO U COULD TELL ME HOW WRONG IT WAS AND STILL IS? WELL U KNOW MY NAME, NOT MY STORY...U HAVE HERD WHAT IV DONE, BUT DONT KNOW WHAT IV BEEN THRU, I DONT NEED PITY , OR UR QUESTIONS
EVERYTHING U SAID ,...IM GUNNA ERASE IT...SO JUST ACT AS IF WHAT U SAID DIDNT HURT ME AT ALL, DONT ...DONT ...EVEN ASK ME ..

Answer 34

NO BECAUSE I USED TO DO THE SAME. WTH DO YOU THINK I WOULD JUDGE YOU??? I WAS GONNA TELL YOU HOW I STOPPED THAT'S IT. NOW PLEASE STOP WITH THE CAPS AND YOU COULD HAVE TOLD ME IN A PM.

Answer 35

Capitals ur in trouble now buddy haha

Answer 36

WELL OBVIOUSLY U DIDN'T NEED TO BRING IT UP. AND EVEN IF U DID, THATS U, NOT ME, THATS UR ISSUES , NOT MINE, I HAVE A REASON FOR EVERYTHING,...SO JUST FORGET IT.

Answer 37

well then, i'm sorry for trying to CHEER YOU UP. i'm sorry for trying to help you, i'm sorry that you don't want to hear my advice!!

Answer 38

Yes, but there is one way, to get rid of that pain! It's not my fault you don't want to know how!

Answer 39

Plaese stop fighting about it

Answer 40

android just stop because sometimes help is what sparks the fire and the fire is gonna burn anyways but only the one who has the fire can put it out so just let seiga be ok

Answer 41

Whats the drama all about?

Answer 42

Agreed @jes230