Question

The deception of lies no truth applies between the tears you never see the inside life never will lie but the people inside will the lies you never know the lies you do know the undone truth the never loving "truth" when will it be over when will they end
Just a poem I wrote let me know what you think

Answer 1

@skullpatrol @opcode @Hoa @UmarsBack do you guys like it?????

Answer 2

Thanks for the medal :)

Answer 3

I don't know what others think, but to me, to someone who study math, Poem is something I never never understand. and I look at poet as a person who has to go everywhere by his own leg looks at a very rich person who drive a BMW!! jealous and can do nothing to fix his bad mood. Admire you. a person study Math but still have a very romantic manner on poem. I am a brick. no way to learn how to say something sweet/

Answer 4

Oh okay I t saw it said yo were studing writingso I thoughtyou might like it

Answer 5

I try!! but getting is another topic. studying writing doesn't mean I am a good writer

Answer 6

Oh okay well thank you for looking at it anyway

Answer 7

nice one @ALYSSA_Irene_Keeton..