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OpenStudy (anonymous):

HELP ME PLZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write an illustrative paper. Use either the point-by-point or extended (block) method. Write a composition of at least 500 words using the illustrative pattern. You may use example, definition, comparison or contrast, details, or any combination of these in your paper. You may use one of these suggested topics or one of your own. How dogs communicate with humans How knowing English can help people How advertisements affect people How crime can be eliminated How media affects people's perception of reality. (If

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Well which topic would you like to write on? I would persinally choose the crime thing... @marycrews

OpenStudy (anonymous):

point by point

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Okay i'm not aqainted with that method so if you would please explain? @marycrews

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Definition: a comparison of one point of a topic with a point of the other topic ---thats the definition of poin by point

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank you @marycrews for that definition. Now first we need to give our essay an introduction. For that we basically need to write a synopsis on what crime is and that the crime rate is incresing rapidly.. Try writing it and show it to me.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

crime is an action or omission that constitutes an offense that may be prosecuted by the state and is punishable by law.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Very good @marycrews . Now could you elaborate a little more on that. Saying how crime rate has gradually increased over the years?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Violent crimes unexpectedly jumped 18 percent last year, the first rise in nearly 20 years, and property crimes rose for first time in a decade

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank you @marycrews . Now you must combine these 2 to form an introduction. Please do that first and then i'll tell you about the body of the essay.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

And to notify you that a body must contain at least two paragraphs.. First paragarph is an introductory paragraph of the body and the second para must contain the ill effects of the topic.. Got it @marycrews ??

OpenStudy (anonymous):

crime is an action or omission that constitutes an offense that may be prosecuted by the state and is punishable by law. Violent crimes unexpectedly jumped 18 percent last year, the first rise in nearly 20 years, and property crimes rose for first time in a decade

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yes there you have your intro.. Okay please tag me from the next time or else i donot really get to know whether you have posted a reply okay @marycrews

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okayy @ashley007

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Allright. Well done. There's your intro. Now as i said before a body normally has 2 paras. And the first one is an indroductory para.. We need to write why crime rate has increased so what info do you have?? Try and elaborate it @marycrews

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i have to go to work at 12 will you be on tomorrow ??? @ashley007

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yeah.. Sure will be there sis.. Tag me wen u need help.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

okayy thanks :)

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