Question

What do you guys think of this as part of the lyrics to a song?

Answer 1

There's only so many lessons you can teach;
Sometimes, there's a limit you have to reach.
You can only go so far
You can only have so many scars
Before you reach the breaking point.

Answer 2

I feel like you could make it a little more complex, but other than that its good.

Answer 3

This is only the chorus (the easiest part for me). The verses will probably come later.

Answer 4

Now tell me what you think.

Flashing light watch out its a train
Running with no track what shame
Pouring down and hard like rain
About to crash like burning planes
living life is kinda lame
Dont flutter up this is no game
Smoking weed to ease the brain
Im super dry I think Im drained
Only taking orders, trained
looking for something to gain
Problems started small like grain
Now its never ending pain
Head down and getting slayin
One thinks its dumb should be ashamed.

Answer 5

Supposed to be dont *flutter up this is no game

Answer 6

f***

Answer 7

I think it's got a really good (I could see it as like a rap song). The rhymes you use are really creative as well.

Answer 8

*really good beat

Answer 9

I like it!