Question

okay guys, this is the poem i promised you. not very good, but still, its in the comments
i'll have to hand type it, cuz i don't wanna post a picture.

Answer 1

There was this girl
Who had a great deal of pain
She been raped and beat
She had hurt and hatred running through her veins

She hid her misery
Oh so very well
No one knew
She had no one to tell

She went through life
Having everyone fooled
School was unbearable
So she became home schooled

No one seen
The cries she cried
But if you looked deep within
You could see it in her eyes

She needed someone
A friend
Someone there
A helping hand

She cut herself
Until she died
And now her friends live
With the guilt deep down inside

If only someone saw
her soul was blistery
If only some one knew about
her unseen misery

I wrote this for my sister, before she got into her accident and was murdered, may she rest in peace.

Answer 2

the story behind this is when my sister was 16, she was raped, beaten half to death, and put on a mask when she went out, only did she tell one person. the bottom parts are her words, i wanted to put them in here when she felt so depressed that she thought that the only way to escape this was to commit scuicide, which didn't get to happen when i found her, trying to OD on her pain killers.

Answer 3

"No one seen
The cries she cried."

Aside from that, punctuation throughout the poem might help.

Answer 4

Oh. That's a pretty depressing back story.

Answer 5

it is kind to share you sisters memory , and also to spread awareness.
Suicide hurts everyone.

Answer 6

That was really good, Android. Better than most things ive seen on here. Im deeply sorry about your sister.

Answer 7

:/ awh

Answer 8

may she rest in peace*

Answer 9

See we all told you you would be just fine at writn a poem good job although it was sad thank you for sharing this story with all of us

Answer 10

so true^(:

Answer 11

u should do more, but on ur life, ur perspective and make it more cheerful, or just say how u feel @ the time(: ur really good...