Question

I have a paper that I was hoping someone could proofread and give me some feedback on how I could make it a little better. It's a new type of paper for me. It's like a research narrative. Thanks!

Answer 1

I can do it.

Answer 2

Horray! I attached the document above!

Answer 3

When do you need it done?

Answer 4

Before midnight Ha!, I'm working on the works cited page right now.

Answer 5

Lol okay! But can you proof read mine tommarrow?

Answer 6

I have never written a paper that's like a research narrative, so if you have any experience with that, I would be so thankful.

Answer 7

Sure, when do you need yours by, tomorrow? I have class in the morning but I will have some time to proof read it after 12 before 4 p.m

Answer 8

Well it is not due tomorrow but can you proof read it tomorrow?

Answer 9

Yep!

Answer 10

Okay! Cool I am reading it now!

Answer 11

Okay thanks!

Answer 12

Does your teacher allow for writings in the first person point of view?

Answer 13

Yes, because it's like a narrative and she wants you to write about your process in answering the question.

Answer 14

okay I am on the last page.

Answer 15

Okay, I just finished Citing everything and proofread it for grammatical errors and other mistakes.

Answer 16

okay I am done

Answer 17

Thanks!

Answer 18

You are welcome! Tell me if it looks fine!

Answer 19

I like, I like your suggestions for better words than my general terms. More college orientated. It really helped!

Answer 20

Do you have your paper ready to be proofread?

Answer 21

No I just started typing it LOL! I should have it done by tomorrow though.

Answer 22

Okay I'll check my email tomorrow than! Lol Well at least we both our procrastinators! Or maybe just me! haha

Answer 23

Oh yea I am terrible haha okay I will message you tomorrow!

Answer 24

Sounds good!