"fifteen years of being mean, now you want to be with me. well you can kiss that dream goodbye, you aren't no friend of mine"

Writing a song, What do you think so far?

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"fifteen years of being mean, now you want to be with me. well you can kiss that dream goodbye, you aren't no friend of mine" 

Writing a song, What do you think so far?

anonymous · Answer

good job

zale101 · Answer

Awesome!

anonymous · Answer

Sounds good. What genre will it be?

tanner23456 · Answer

Interesting, "aren't no friend of mine" is a double negative. You basically just said "you are a friend of mine." I don't mean to be rude and I don't know if that's what you were going for but if you make this into a song you might consider fixing it. Be sure to post the finish product if you end up recording it.

anonymous · Answer

@tanner23456 fine it could be" your no friend of mine".

tanner23456 · Answer

no, but it could be "you're no friend of mine."

anonymous · Answer

blah blah you know what i meant.

tanner23456 · Answer

Just trying to help you out. It's proven that people who speak properly are more respected.

anonymous · Answer

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