Question

These tears I hold
Can't be held anymore
They flow and flow
and won't stop
Everyone sees
But no one stops to help they simply walk away
Not asking or caring
Why would anyone care?
I understand everyone has problems of their own
But Im dying inside
I try to smile but
it won't come together
So I don't try
I just frown my famous frown
And I walk away
It seems like I need to get help
But no one believes
My sadness
My depression
No one believes me......

Answer 1

Whatcha think?

Answer 2

It is good. I really feel sorry for the person crying. I can't believe no one wouldn't check on that person. It makes me want to cry. Good poem....Katelirum :)

Answer 3

Tbh I actually write these from what I feel so this poem is about me...

Answer 4

Are you ok ?

Answer 5

Kinda bland. A lot of poems look like this.

Answer 6

I'm fine...

Answer 7

you just had me worried when you said the poem was about you. Glad o hear that you are fine :)

Answer 8

oops...typo....*to hear

Answer 9

Yea

Answer 10

This is good. :)

Answer 11

Thanks

Answer 12

Should I put another one on here