Question

Zombie Story

Answer 1

@CoughCoughAchoo

Answer 2

@Hope_nicole

Answer 3

TO BE CONTINUED :p

Answer 4

@razor99
I like the description in your story, Good Job!

Answer 5

Thanx :D

Answer 6

I'm stil reading it though

Answer 7

Is this present tense or past tense?

Answer 8

lol present i guess

Answer 9

When you wrote:
"Cheyenne voice broked into my deep thinking in my mind"
it should be written:
"Cheyenne voice broke into my deep thinking in my mind"

Answer 10

yea thanx i will correct it

Answer 11

or
Cheyenne voice broke into my deep thoughts in my mind.

Answer 12

You wrote:
"Cheynne said holding her hand over her mouth"
It would be easier if you just said:
"Cheynne said covering her mouth disgustedly."

Answer 13

You wrote:
As I spoked to the co-pilots.

The character was speaking with only one pilot?

Answer 14

And i think that's about it. I'm looking forward to read more :)

Answer 15

no no the chatacter was speaking with both of them

Answer 16

thanx for the help

Answer 17

Oh sorry...My bad :O

Answer 18

done it with correction

Answer 19

never expected that lol :D

Answer 20

Great Job! :D

Answer 21

hahahahaha i love my story thats why

Answer 22

Thanx to u
u deserve credit for that

Answer 23

:D

Answer 24

Omg visitors C:

Answer 25

lol what ya think

Answer 26

That was a Awesome Story man!!!!

Answer 27

Why is this at the top of the English section if it was written a year ago? XD

Answer 28

lool :P

Answer 29

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