I have to write a research paper about a career I want to do. Well I want to be a veterinarian. I have to write a general introduction ( This paragraph should grab the reader's interest and be a general introduction to the topic) and a specific introduction ( This paragraph states specifically what will be covered in the paper and should include the thesis statement. I need help on writing these. This paper is worth 50% of my grade! Please help. It would be greatly appreciated.

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I have to write a research paper about a career I want to do. Well I want to be a veterinarian. I have to write a general introduction ( This paragraph should grab the reader's interest and be a general introduction to the topic) and a specific introduction ( This paragraph states specifically what will be covered  in the paper and should include the thesis statement. I need help on writing these. This paper is worth 50% of my grade! Please help. It would be greatly appreciated.

anonymous · Answer

well, first off what would you want to put in the other part of your paper?

anonymous · Answer

The other parts I have to have a background information paragraph, educational requirements, experience, personal traits or characteristics needed, physical requirements, duties, working conditions, salary, summary, and conclusion.

anonymous · Answer

okay, so in the first paragraph you should tell the audience what they are about to learn about in one sentence per topic

anonymous · Answer

Okay, I also need a good attention grabber. Just to make it more interesting.

anonymous · Answer

Okay try the following: "Everyday you see doctors helping other people, but you rarely see people helping animals. Which is why, as a future career, I want to be a veterinarian.

anonymous · Answer

That's good. Thank you!

anonymous · Answer

thank you and you're welcome

anonymous · Answer

What would be a good thesis statement?

anonymous · Answer

Okay I want to be chef, so i dont know very much about veterinarians, but if "i" was writing a report about my career then i would write something like the following(hopefully this will help you to better understand what you will need to do): While a male child is growing up, as an adult he either wants to be soldier or a superhero, but I wanted to be a chef. In college, I could learn to cook and serve different types of entrees and desserts. Afterwards, I would open up my own restaurant and spread the word. I would then travel around the world to discover new recipes and to share my foods with everyone.

anonymous · Answer

That helps out a lot. Thank you again.

anonymous · Answer

you're welcome