Question

I have to write an essay of a blind folded experience.

last week we took a walk outside and got in parters.. one of us got blindfolded and was walked around campus by the other person without the blindfold.

we later switched off.. and i became the guide of the blind person..

i am supposed to write an essay about the experience i had ... but i cant include myself or refer to no one else.. I cant use metaphors or a lot of details with the sound... i am not supposed to be very descriptive but i am supposed to write 5 pages about this... topic

Answer 1

Wow sounds like you have your work cut out for you, since you can't write about yourself or someone else, no metaphors..huh, you could write from an unknown perspective to the readers point of view? You have to be bland about the whole essay, you can still share emotions without be too descriptive. Could you recount the experience but without notion to that it was yourself experiencing it?

Answer 2

yea I began to write it .. but its just hard to find ways to begin sentences and not trying to add a 3rd person or refer to someone in general

Answer 3

Blindness is the inability to see. Imagine not being able to see anything through your own eyes no colors, no shapes, no figures, and even your family; now imagine having perfect eyesight and still be blinded from what’s going on in the world. It is possible for an individual to have perfect sight and yet be physically and literally blind, and it is possible for an individual not to be able to see at all and still be a sighted person.

Answer 4

i started like this for the rough draft as she got to the this she returned it and that it wasnt going to be a good paper..... -_-

Answer 5

Hmm wow really! In my opinion that'd make a great paper, but guess it wasn't what she was looking for eh? She probably wants even less details than that gives >:l

Answer 6

haha ima just improve mines change it up a little and give it to her like that....

Answer 7

Maybe she wants it to be more about just the experience, and not about people that can "see"? But I still think your first rough draft would be an awesome paper anyways if it was what she wanted haha :)