Question

This poem isn't about ANYONE! Just something i wrote a while ago and didnt post it.

Answer 1

Once again you FAIL to realize how you push me away. More and more I want to get FARTHER away. But you wont see because your blind....and once im completely out of sight, it wont matter because you dont see what your doing wrong in the first place so in your eyes it will be me leaving you standing in the cold. When I'm the one walking in the cold.

Answer 2

A descriptive point about mistakes done, but not confronting or being able to recognize on it.

Answer 3

Ummm what?

Answer 4

What I mean is it talks about your significant other not realizing what has happened, and caused you to move farther away due to the lack of connection and understanding.

Answer 5

i think its good(:

Answer 6

i like it, keep up the good work!

Answer 7

....love.. it... (/.\) lol its.better than mine... hehe

Answer 8

♥♥

Answer 9

Thanks :3

Answer 10

I like it (: It's good..do you always do this?

Answer 11

No, almost never lol. My first one :P

Answer 12

thats pretty good

Answer 13

around a quater till three.. you burst into the bathroom searching for me..your brother hides me while your away …unused but wanted for most of the day …i feel you anger as you hold me tight.. you press me to your skin with out a fight … what could poses humans to act like this… to love ,cry,and cut there wrist.. as i watch the crimpson tears run down your skin …i hear you wishper ill never do this again… so i sit in this window pian .. just watching the rain …until a quater till three… when you bust in the bathroon searching for me

Answer 14

o.o I loved both of your poems lol

Answer 15

Go take some lessons from @lovatic4life cx

Answer 16

Ha hater

Answer 17

Lol ay D you know im JP i felt mind fakked reading your poem ... guess that mean its a good 1

Answer 18

I was like dafuq are you walking in the cold when its 63 degrees outside o-o

Answer 19

I wrote this a while ago. Never posted it.

Answer 20

Lol I been making songs for a while but I havent posted in a month !!

Answer 21

We've noticed tyou aint posted notin

Answer 22

RIght -.- I'll post a song tonight or tomorrow morning

Answer 23

You lying on yo D, you finna leave and not be on for like another month. and then post one xD rt

Answer 24

Lol naww i wont, I'll post it now then haha

Answer 25

*cough* he betta be comin on more! HE PROMISED HE GONNA COME SEE HIS TBSUMBFF >.> <3 @BradNasty and KAYLA AMAZING<3

Answer 26

i love it darrius!

Answer 27

Wow, amazing poem. :)
I'm actually in the kinda situation right now and it fits it perfectly.

Answer 28

Thanks :P

Answer 29

I love it !

Answer 30

Thanks :P

Answer 31

it is good darrius, mine kinda sucks. an it depressin.