Question

I have to do a 1 paragraph essay in spanish. I didn't know that it had to be in spanish when I first submitted it. This is what I submitted:
I would absolutely love to visit Argentina in August. From September to November is spring. Summer is December to march. Fall is from March to May. Winter is from June to August. During winter, it is really cold and sometimes snows. It’s a good idea to bring Pants and sweat shirts with you during this season. During the summer, it is REALLY hot so you will need shorts and short sleeve shirts and tank tops with sandals or sneakers. Spring is cool with som

Answer 1

wind. Very light rain. Pants and tank tops are good for this season. Fall is the same way. Beanies are good to wear during the cold seasons and gloves when it is really cold. There is rain year round so if you like to take walks in the rain, then bring your rain coats and boots.
My teacher said that it was excellent but it has to be in spanish and as long as my spanish and grammer is right, then I have a 100. so, this is what I translated it to:
Yo definitivamente me encantaría volver a visitar la Argentina en agosto. De septiembre a noviembre es la primavera. Verano es de diciembre a marzo. El otoño es de marzo a mayo. El invierno es de junio a agosto. Durante el invierno, hace mucho frío y nieva a veces. Es una buena idea llevar pantalones y sudaderas con usted durante esta temporada. Durante el verano, hace mucho calor por lo que tendrá pantalones cortos y camisas de manga corta y camisetas sin mangas con sandalias o zapatillas de deporte. La primavera es fresca, con un poco de viento. Lluvia muy ligera. Pantalones y camisetas sin mangas son buenas para esta temporada. El otoño es la misma manera. Gorros son buenas para usar durante las estaciones frías y guantes cuando hace mucho frío. Hay lluvias todo el año, así que si te gusta salir a caminar bajo la lluvia, a continuación, llevar sus abrigos y botas de lluvia.

Answer 2

Can someone please tell me if my spanish is right? Thank you!