the blood of my adversary drips ever so slowly down the drain. someone please help me retrieve this cold body from the drizziling rain, now that hes dead my being is calm.. i not longer hear the faint beat of a ticking time bomb .... how well is this written?? how could you change it to make it better? re-write this to make it better.(20 points)

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what is this from?

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what do you really need help with?

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its for my school.. my teacher put this on my homework.. why?

anonymous · Answer

is this word for word from your homework?

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its bye someone anonymous and yes why?? we are studying the master of the macabre and others like him

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okay. sorry i cant help i have to get a paper done for school. thanks.

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okay thank you anyway

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do it have questions for it?

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does*