Question

The paragraph below needs to be made more coherent. Use repetition, synonyms, and pronouns to link the sentences.

Answer 1

Many cities are easily distinguished by their skylines. In such cities--New York and Paris, for example--certain buildings are so distinctive that the buildings have come to represent New York and Paris. Just a glance at the skyline's profile tells the viewer of the profile what city is pictured.

Answer 2

Hi there - this paragraph sounds coherent to me! Could you add some clarification of what your class might be looking for?