Question

Tell me what you think
Title:Caged Bird
Am locked inside my prison cell
But to me its more like hell
I cry at night
To know that everything is not alright
No one cares about me
So why don't they just set me free
So I can die
With no pride
When i cry am sad
But heck am more mad
This bird will fly someday
For now i'll pray
For when the day comes
I'll be set free in the morning sun
To catch that freedom i'll fly or even run
Not to come back
So am ready pack
Soon the light will shine on me
And i'll know i've been set free

Answer 1

I like it. :)

Answer 2

Thanks :)

Answer 3

I LOVE it !

Answer 4

Thx :) that means alot

Answer 5

wow its really good. i no how the lil bird feels... i feel the same.. but that was a nice poem.. and welcome to openstudy if you have any questions feel free to ask me or a mod. congrats on your first question and i hope you find openstudy very helpful for your studies :)

Answer 6

Thanks i will :D

Answer 7

great job nice bro

Answer 8

Wow, I like it. Its very sad but deep at the same time.

Answer 9

Thanks u guys that means alot and am glad u guys like it :D

Answer 10

wow that is awesome, welcome to study!!! ;P

Answer 11

Thx n am so glad 2 be here :)

Answer 12

awesome, tht pic looks familiar, r u a guy?