Question

MEDALLL TO WHOEVER REPLIES
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Nothing would make me happier,
then to give up, and let anger run my life.
But then I stop and think.
Is it really worth it?
To let all that doubted me win?
To let all that looked up to me down?
I live and scream against hate,
but die by giving into it.
If it's worth your tears,
if it's worth your energy,
if it is something that does not allow not only you,
but others as well,
to be what they were meant to be,
then it is worth the fight to end.

~Breanna Floyd

I'm looking for some critics, what do you guys think?

Answer 1

Its good lol, im trying to be a critic but its almost perfect lol js :P

Answer 2

thanks :)

Answer 3

Well maybe you should be more specific on whats making you give up. Just a thougth :P

Answer 4

lol thanks :)

Answer 5

looks good girl