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Sometimes you catch two best friends who have known each other for so long, yet they attain somewhat insufficient dissimilarity. However, just because two friends have their variances doesn’t necessarily mean they can’t develop a connection that compromises the few similarities in which supports their friendship. This is the case with Cindy and me. We have been decent friends for a quiet long time now, and I’ve recognized that there are many things in which differentiate us. Regardless, our friendship is significantly cultivating stronger and profounder through mutual understanding and being acceptable and authentic to one another. While Cindy and I are both friends who share the same religious beliefs and values, we are greatly diverse in regards to our personalities, education goals, and fashion style.