Question

Can some peeps please look over this. I promise it's not that boring:P Please!!

http://prezi.com/m8ylbfpmcwbz/artificial-organs-and-bionics/

Answer 1

@jim_thompson5910 @e.cociuba @Will679 @Hayden14 @Hoa @Unknown11 @InYourHead @brandonloves @blurbendy @EvonHowell @Mertsj @Bomull @jennamariie1 @kaylalynn @LoveYou*69

Answer 2

Can i please have some feedback!! PLEASE

Answer 3

did you make that?

Answer 4

yeah

Answer 5

looks pretty awesome

Answer 6

thxs:)

Answer 7

Thxs:)

Answer 8

Can i please have some feedback!! PLEASE

Answer 9

Anyone else??

Answer 10

@karama @lala2 @help123please. @falloutwas @So1D @starrhunter @ashley321 @WhiteSkys

Answer 11

I think it looks nice.
Though i'd prefer PowerPoint :P
Prezi is a little bit cluttered, difficult to follow all those movements, but that's just my opinion.

Answer 12

thats pretty cool

Answer 13

Haha thxs, i perfer prezi just cause it's something new @thomaster Thxs:) @WhiteSkys

Answer 14

For most people it's new yea. On my school they use it since like 2009 but mostly for project presentations.

Answer 15

Very good!

Answer 16

Oh, see i just heard about it last year:0 @thomaster Thxs:D @lala2

Answer 17

its very cool :)

Answer 18

*:) lol @thomaster

Answer 19

Thxs:D @So1D

Answer 20

np

Answer 21

prezi, I love that app....I'm cleaning atm, but I'll give some feedback when I get back lol

Answer 22

I know me too, it's awesome!! Ok thank you so much :D @karama

Answer 23

prezi does look snazzy and cool...but I agree that's it's dizzying to follow and it's hard to pinpoint where you want to go and which slide you want to see

even more annoying is that it's hard to zoom in and read some slides, but that could just be me not knowing how to work it

I prefer to stick with the tried and true powerpoint since it's much simpler

Other than that, the content looks great and the pictures are really cool to look at. You should also throw in more stats as well.

Answer 24

Thxs, what kind of stats?? What u mean?? @jim_thompson5910

Answer 25

well if you have any data on the success rate of any transplants, then I'd throw that in

Answer 26

also, the cost of operations, therapy, treatment, etc is another good stat to include as well

Answer 27

can't think of any other kinds of stats, but I'm sure they're out there

Answer 28

OMG thank you so much:D Your the only one who gave me TRUE feedback,<3 thank you!! @jim_thompson5910

Answer 29

you're welcome, otherwise, can't think of anything else

very impressive presentation

Answer 30

Why thank you kind sir :P

Answer 31

lol yw

Answer 32

Hey Lizz :) I started looking through your prezy and I think on the second click you can make janet's name, the subtitle, and your name a larger. They're difficult to read when navigating. I'll keep looking through the slides :) sound good?

Answer 33

I might add a few labels to your slides; in the slide defining A-organs, it would be beneficial to have a label under the heart and artificial version.

Answer 34

and off topic, but total swag on your profile xD

Answer 35

OMG thank you!! Ill make the changes as soon as i can, but merci:D @karama

Answer 36

de nada :) I'll point out what I see, do you want any suggestions regarding the style and grammar of the text?

Answer 37

haha thxs ;D

Answer 38

semicolon winkie face back at ya

Answer 39

lol

Answer 40

I think adding ring labels on the edge of each ring would help illustrate what each group is handling....maybe a transition slide would work inside the ring, idk :) it would be really cool, and I mean cool (this is an intriguing topic), if you put small excerpts below each organ describing what part of it does what, how it's made, etc. really whatever you think fits best.

Answer 41

also, have you read about research into recreating sensory in artificial limbs? it's amazing!

Answer 42

ok, but i have to make sure its within 5-8 minutes. 'n i don't want to cram the info. And no haven't heard about tht...

Answer 43

it's all good, I think in that case you could use labels as supplements. You wouldn't be adding anything new, just a shorter version of what you are already going to say.

Answer 44

when I give presentation, I tend to do it in a loosely guided fashion. My bullet points remind me what I need to say, in the event that i forget, as well as help the viewer follow

Answer 45

Ok, Thank You!! Thanks for the real feedback:)

Answer 46

you're very welcome xD I probably wrote way too much *scratches head*

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and I hope the presentation goes great :)

Answer 48

Haha no, ur fine, i would have probably done the same thing lol ;D I hope it goes well too * scratches head LOL

Answer 49

*these asterisks are legit* please feel free to let me know if you have any questions, comments, or if ya just want to tell me how cool my profile is xP that's fine by me

Answer 50

lol, ya crack me up ;D And ok maybe ur profile is cool, but mines legit and wayy better LOL

Answer 51

you're totally right....I mean I had to put so much effort into making my photo and description good...you, on the other hand, just sat on a log, mispelled no....and bam! attractive photo popped out ; P

Answer 52

Lol, sweet and simple; D And i like spelling no tht way so leave it be : )

Answer 53

K :p gtg, but I'll see you around :) have a good night liz - Karama

Answer 54

K u too : D I guess ill see u around, if i feel like talking to ya, lol ; ) Have a great night!!

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-Liz