I look up into the stars and find myself on the ground, being alone is not what im hoping for living with people i dont know never meet is depressing because you are wondering why did i screw up to be in this situation so i just pray to make the pain go away i cant sleep my life away because i know every thing is going to be okay.
I REALLY WANT TRUE OPINIONS ON THIS.

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I look up into the stars and find myself on the ground, being alone is not what im hoping for living with people i dont know never meet is depressing because you are wondering why did i screw up to be in this situation so i just pray to make the pain go away i cant sleep my life away because i know every thing is going to be okay.
I REALLY WANT TRUE OPINIONS ON THIS.

anonymous · Answer

Its good! especially that first sentence! But it is a run on sentence........but otherwise good!