Question

hey i need help with this short story that i need to write :)

Answer 1

my short story has to be about someone that tries to be like someone else due to jealousy.
so i picked a cat that wanted to be a dog.
Any suggestions? (about what topic i should pick ex: fox wants to be a cat, blah blah blah)

Answer 2

@.Sam. @help123please. @Mertsj

Answer 3

@ryan123345 @nubeer

Answer 4

@uri @SnuggieLad @Preetha

Answer 5

@skullpatrol

Answer 6

someone???? And you picked a cat and a dog? Animals are not people.

Answer 7

it can be a human or animal

Answer 8

:)

Answer 9

So if you have picked a cat and a dog what is the problem?

Answer 10

you want someone to write it for you or what?

Answer 11

And animals do not have the capacity to want to be something else. A dog does not know it is a dog.

Answer 12

no no a need suggestions like topic that i can wirte about i want more

Answer 13

and thats why i came here for help! :)

Answer 14

So it sounds to me like the purpose of the exercise is to have the student explore the phoniness and futility of trying to be something one is not. At least that is the way I would approach it. And you should know that I am terrible as this sort of thing.

Answer 15

in class i read an Aesop fable. its about a donkey that wanted to be a dog. But at the end he learns that its better to be donkey than a dog.
after reading this i was asked to write a story about someone or animal that wanted to be someone else.

Answer 16

@nathan917 @nett2600 @nubeer @ash2326 @Ashleyisakitty @ahtnamas @bakonloverk @Callisto @DerNurmister @EthanJumper @help123please @Hoa @iluvreading @kaylalynn @M_Vamshi_Kumar_Reddy @MotherOfGod @merchandize

Answer 17

sorry that i tagged to many people

Answer 18

Some what yes but no :P

Answer 19

Yeah, it's a good topic. I have something

Answer 20

okay go ahead :)

Answer 21

WHy don't you do two girls that are total opposite for ex . one girl can be adventuresses ,hates girly stuff a tom boy but the is ms .popular loves pink etc.

Answer 22

Dogs are man's friend, certain investigation agencies have dogs, They help in cases. But cats aren't employed, you can now turn this into a story. One cat and dog used to be good friends, but then dog got hired into FBI. They couldn't hangout much and so cat started feeling if it could be a dog and so on
@Tahmina What do you think of this?

Answer 23

@ash2326 love it perfect! now i just need to fill in these bubles using your topic

Answer 24

Looks like we have our story @ash2326

That seems like a great topic!

Answer 25

Haha Thanks @nathan917

Answer 26

okay introduction:

Answer 27

Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City.
THATS ALL I HAVE IM LOST! HELP
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Answer 28

ok then the rufus gets called away to go to the agencies and leaves megan behind she get mad

Answer 29

There is never any question in bio, but there was a good questions last night went on for social study's and it went on for like 6 hrs it was about "The Rise or Rome"

Seems like there is only good questions in math. For some reason That is the most popular place for questions.

Answer 30

okay:) sice this is an intro doesnt it have to be flowing like i mean wordy and engaing.

Answer 31

And sometime language arts.

Answer 32

They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship.

Answer 33

so this is the intro that you helped ash:DONT I NEED A INTRODUCING SENTENCE HERE OR SHOULD I JUST START LIKE THIS. Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City.They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship.

Answer 34

*It all started out as a short story*

5 day later It becomes A chapter book :P

@ash2326

Answer 35

ASH IS BRILLIANT

Answer 36

and all of you others too :) thanks ash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 37

I think this is good :)

@Tahmina thanks :)

Answer 38

welcome ;)

Answer 39

Yes. I would agree with that.

Language arts in really not my best topic i more of a math guy or science kinda person.