Question

please help edit my short story

Answer 1

plz help edit this

Answer 2

@saifoo.khan @Falco276 @nubeer

Answer 3

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Answer 4

Dammit, do people just tag whoever they want with this annoying spam.

Answer 5

sorry :)

Answer 6

Your first problem is your text is too big and you have no tittle.

>2013
>Not using New Times Roman

Answer 7

title is " black Widow"

Answer 8

if u find any mistakes please dont hesitate to edit it. I will greatly appreciate it:) and when editing type in capitals thanks!

Answer 9

2manyspellingmistakes4me

Answer 10

Give us some background on why you're writing the story and the age group.

Answer 11

gtgt tell u later

Answer 12

in class i read an Aesop fable. its about a donkey that wanted to be a dog. But at the end he learns that its better to be donkey than a dog.
after reading this i was asked to write a story about someone or animal that wanted to be someone else.

Answer 13

the fables called "The donkey that did not want to be himself"

Answer 14

ohkay firstly plz dont put word attachments.. many ppl don't wanna download random stuff..

Answer 15

okay ill try something else

Answer 16

I dont mean to be rude or anything but that was terrible! If i was your english teacher i would go kill myself. There were too many errors. maybe you should try again. but think back to when you learned about punctuation and spelling, really helps when you write.

Answer 17

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VhgtUoCRhMQ8RjZLoknzNaOsw2JAYlaQnkow-z2radI/edit

Answer 18

if u go there ull see me edit and u can edit also

Answer 19

k gud!

Answer 20

That story was so horrible it gave me cancer.

Answer 21

sorry :(

Answer 22

and if the story you read was about a donkey wanting to be a dog then maybe you shouldnt have your story be about a cat wanting to be a dog, maybe got with humans cause you know animals dont do any of that

Answer 23

n please write your dialogues in double quotes..

Answer 24

My eyes burn.

Answer 25

come on @Compassionate i know it was bad but be nice

Answer 26

idont no y i can't edit it!

Answer 27

:(

Answer 28

k ttyl..

Answer 29

because its set to view only

Answer 30

i fixed it!

Answer 31

thank god. u did!!

Answer 32

@thomaster can u help me edit my writing plz

Answer 33

@hartnn @satellite73 can u help me plz

Answer 34

lol i don't even follow this subject xD